Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions
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2009
It keeps the original formatting.
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texte = --001517741884c9140804778f57e3 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=windows-1252 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable If you do leave the Object oriented programmingrefere= nce in, I believe "object-oriented" should be hyphenated. Tana On Wed, Nov 4, 2009 at 9:51 AM, Brian Fries wrot= e: > Overall quite good. A few nitpicks... > > In the Terminology section: > > *Paramaters* can be included in many of the Tags, Contexts or Commands. > > > Should be "Parameters". > > > In the History section: > > WebCatalog and Pacific Coast Software was purchased > > > "was" should be "were" > > set such as Object oriented programming using > the [function] and [scope] > > > It's not really Object-oriented (we're not declaring classes with embedde= d > data and method handlers). These are more akin to Structured Programming > concepts. > > opted for the more supported solutions > > > Perhaps=85 "opted for more actively supported solutions" > > the developers of WebDNA that revived the language > > > I would use "who revived the language" instead of "that". > > > Brian Fries > BrainScan Software > > > On Nov 4, 2009, at 8:23 AM, Donovan Brooke wrote: > > Hello Guys/Gals, > > Here is a link to the wikipedia draft I've been working on: > > http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Donovanbrooke/sandbox > > If any of you are good with grammar, please let me know what > needs corrected. It has to be as polished as can be before > going "live" to avoid spammy remarks from Wiki admins and/or > deletion. ;-) > > Donovan > > > > -- > Donovan Brooke > Euca Design Center > [Practical-Ethical-Efficient] > www.euca.us > egg.bz > artglass-forum.com > --------------------------------------------------------- > This message is sent to you because you are subscribed to > the mailing list . > To unsubscribe, E-mail to: > archives: http://mail.webdna.us/list/talk@webdna.us > old archives: http://dev.webdna.us/TalkListArchive/ > Bug Reporting: http://forum.webdna.us/eucabb.html?page=3Dtopics&category= =3D288 > > > --001517741884c9140804778f57e3 Content-Type: text/html; charset=windows-1252 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable If you do leave the O= bject oriented programming reference in, I believe "object-oriente= d" should be hyphenated.
It's not really Object-oriented (we're = not declaring classes with embedded data and method handlers). These are mo= re akin to Structured Programming concepts.
the developers of WebDNA th= at revived the language
I would use &= quot;who revived the language" instead of "that".
Brian Fries
BrainScan Software
On Nov 4, 2009, at 8:23 AM, Donovan Brooke wrote:
Hello Guys/Gals,
Here is a link to the = wikipedia draft I've been working on:
If any of you are good with grammar, please let me know what needs c= orrected. It has to be as polished as can be before going "live&quo= t; to avoid spammy remarks from Wiki admins and/or deletion. ;-)
--001517741884c9140804778f57e3 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=windows-1252 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable If you do leave the Object oriented programmingrefere= nce in, I believe "object-oriented" should be hyphenated. Tana On Wed, Nov 4, 2009 at 9:51 AM, Brian Fries wrot= e: > Overall quite good. A few nitpicks... > > In the Terminology section: > > *Paramaters* can be included in many of the Tags, Contexts or Commands. > > > Should be "Parameters". > > > In the History section: > > WebCatalog and Pacific Coast Software was purchased > > > "was" should be "were" > > set such as Object oriented programming using > the [function] and [scope] > > > It's not really Object-oriented (we're not declaring classes with embedde= d > data and method handlers). These are more akin to Structured Programming > concepts. > > opted for the more supported solutions > > > Perhaps=85 "opted for more actively supported solutions" > > the developers of WebDNA that revived the language > > > I would use "who revived the language" instead of "that". > > > Brian Fries > BrainScan Software > > > On Nov 4, 2009, at 8:23 AM, Donovan Brooke wrote: > > Hello Guys/Gals, > > Here is a link to the wikipedia draft I've been working on: > > http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Donovanbrooke/sandbox > > If any of you are good with grammar, please let me know what > needs corrected. It has to be as polished as can be before > going "live" to avoid spammy remarks from Wiki admins and/or > deletion. ;-) > > Donovan > > > > -- > Donovan Brooke > Euca Design Center > [Practical-Ethical-Efficient] > www.euca.us > egg.bz > artglass-forum.com > --------------------------------------------------------- > This message is sent to you because you are subscribed to > the mailing list . > To unsubscribe, E-mail to: > archives: http://mail.webdna.us/list/talk@webdna.us > old archives: http://dev.webdna.us/TalkListArchive/ > Bug Reporting: http://forum.webdna.us/eucabb.html?page=3Dtopics&category= =3D288 > > > --001517741884c9140804778f57e3 Content-Type: text/html; charset=windows-1252 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable If you do leave the O= bject oriented programming reference in, I believe "object-oriente= d" should be hyphenated.
It's not really Object-oriented (we're = not declaring classes with embedded data and method handlers). These are mo= re akin to Structured Programming concepts.
the developers of WebDNA th= at revived the language
I would use &= quot;who revived the language" instead of "that".
Brian Fries
BrainScan Software
On Nov 4, 2009, at 8:23 AM, Donovan Brooke wrote:
Hello Guys/Gals,
Here is a link to the = wikipedia draft I've been working on:
If any of you are good with grammar, please let me know what needs c= orrected. It has to be as polished as can be before going "live&quo= t; to avoid spammy remarks from Wiki admins and/or deletion. ;-)
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