Re: [WebDNA] [OT] WebDNA Wiki - need grammar check / suggestions
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texte = This is a cryptographically signed message in MIME format.--------------ms070000090002060509080600Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bitDonovan,Perhaps a more clear 3rd sentence would be appropriate. I would avoidreferring to WebDNA as "It".Before:"It was released in 1995 and the name was registered as a trademark in1998.[2] WebDNA is currently owned by WebDNA Software Corporation."After:Released in 1995, the name was registered as a trademark in 1998.[2]WebDNA is currently owned by WebDNA Software Corporation.MarcDonovan Brooke wrote:> Hello Guys/Gals,> > Here is a link to the wikipedia draft I've been working on:> > http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Donovanbrooke/sandbox> > If any of you are good with grammar, please let me know what> needs corrected. It has to be as polished as can be before> going "live" to avoid spammy remarks from Wiki admins and/or> deletion. ;-)> > Donovan> > > -- -------------------------------------------Marc ThompsonSoftware EngineerOffice of Information TechnologyUniversity of Utah801.585.9264marc.thompson@utah.edu---------------------------------------------------------ms070000090002060509080600Content-Type: application/x-pkcs7-signature; name="smime.p7s"Content-Transfer-Encoding: base64Content-Disposition: attachment; filename="smime.p7s"Content-Description: S/MIME Cryptographic 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--------------ms070000090002060509080600--
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This is a cryptographically signed message in MIME format.--------------ms070000090002060509080600Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bitDonovan,Perhaps a more clear 3rd sentence would be appropriate. I would avoidreferring to WebDNA as "It".Before:"It was released in 1995 and the name was registered as a trademark in1998.[2] WebDNA is currently owned by WebDNA Software Corporation."After:Released in 1995, the name was registered as a trademark in 1998.[2]WebDNA is currently owned by WebDNA Software Corporation.MarcDonovan Brooke wrote:> Hello Guys/Gals,> > Here is a link to the wikipedia draft I've been working on:> > http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Donovanbrooke/sandbox> > If any of you are good with grammar, please let me know what> needs corrected. It has to be as polished as can be before> going "live" to avoid spammy remarks from Wiki admins and/or> deletion. ;-)> > Donovan> > > -- -------------------------------------------Marc ThompsonSoftware EngineerOffice of Information TechnologyUniversity of Utah801.585.9264marc.thompson@utah.edu---------------------------------------------------------ms070000090002060509080600Content-Type: application/x-pkcs7-signature; name="smime.p7s"Content-Transfer-Encoding: base64Content-Disposition: attachment; filename="smime.p7s"Content-Description: S/MIME Cryptographic 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--------------ms070000090002060509080600--
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